so since you are looping off your return line, does that mean your fuel rail only has one fuel fitting, which is the inlet? thats what it kinda looks like... i wonder how that works... i know on the mustangs with "returnless" fuel setups, the fuel pump gets different voltages - speeding up and slowing down the pump.
this is the style i have and am running.. (for reference)

1987
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